[Timfen]

BG is nice but I feel the shapes coming from the render aren't very original and strike me as a replication of Kir's work and you haven't pulled them off aswell, if you try random shapes coming from the render then it may work better.

Render's face is too golden, looks slightly oversaturated too. Text isn't that good either, it does the job but thats about it.

Reflection and lighting are nice though, best parts of this wall,