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Wrong section mate, but anyway. The shadow render ain't positioned very well if i'm honoust. Maybe you should put it to the left and erase the arm.
The render is a bit sharp, the effects over it are nice, good colours, but also a bit to sharp, you shouldn't work to much with sharpen. In my opinion that ruins most of the sigs/walls.
BG is kinda empty, you've could have added some textures in it. Maybe you did, but then higher the opacity of it.
The text is good, but maybe you should have blended it in a bit, with a gradient or just with a soft brush eraser. The sides of the wall are to black imo too.
But anyway mate, you're still learning so you could only learn more, and more. Hope you do so you'll become a great artist. You're already a great member. so KIU mate.
I'm now giving you just a comment as you do to everyone, just because you really deserve it.
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