Not a fan mate.. The render effects are poor, and the smudge looks bad. It's a little too sharp for my taste to. The lighting seems a little strong, especially at his face. The background render is too visible, and it should be blended better with the background. The background is bad, it's way too empty. It should atleast have a color overlay. The placement of the red lines in the background could be better, and that goes with the text too. It should be placed closer to the render, and the smudge on the text isn't needed.
Keep training!
