[Immortalis]

beginning


finish

[Sapi]

Well, the start was pretty good, and I think it looks better than the finish tbh. The render on the start is too blurry though, wich is fixed in the finish. I like the background both in the start and the finish, but it's a little empty. The effects on the start are nice and clean, but in the finish they look a little too sharp and they don't really fit in. The text needs a lot of work too imo. The underline and the reflection isn't needed.

[brsaloni]

you can add some light texture's and brush's ..

the text is simple ..

KIU

[selam]

U need Lighting . pretty nice

[fm-freakje]

The BG is to empty and the text needs more work!
Kiu

[Tom-Styl3]

The BG is empty
Effects on the renders is good
KIU

[miller.]

Sorry,but its bad.Yeah,the start was pretty okay but i dont like the texture work and the text looks simple aswell,needs an other style tho.The colours are ok,needs some lightings,keep it up mate

[GL-Style]

The start was pretty good
but BG is to empty in the End

[Immortalis]

thx mates

[.Skrapzeee]

Not bad mate The texture work could be better imo, and so could blending. Add some orange or red textures around him on colour dodge or something. The bg is a bit plain and dark so lighten it up a bit. The text could be a better font and could flow better with the sig imo. The render works nice, no problems there. Keep it up!