Its really nice mate,the texts are good on it and the clipping mask is great aswell,imo the bg needs some more textures,the render effects are simple and nice,i really liek this one mate,good style,keep up the good work
It looks nice mate, the texts aren't bad but I don't really think they fit that well in the style, the render is also looking a tad low quality. The background is looking too empty, try to add some more stuff into it. Keep it up
Well it's a good idea mate i like how you try to make new stuff but this one especially on the bottom is kinda busy, also the render looks kinda LQ, try to practice more and you will execute your work better