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05-17-2008, 05:29 AM
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The REAL King of Leon
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Yahhhhh, not to fond. 
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05-17-2008, 05:36 AM
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sig&ava by me
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Wrong section mate, but anyway. The shadow render ain't positioned very well if i'm honoust. Maybe you should put it to the left and erase the arm.
The render is a bit sharp, the effects over it are nice, good colours, but also a bit to sharp, you shouldn't work to much with sharpen. In my opinion that ruins most of the sigs/walls.
BG is kinda empty, you've could have added some textures in it. Maybe you did, but then higher the opacity of it.
The text is good, but maybe you should have blended it in a bit, with a gradient or just with a soft brush eraser. The sides of the wall are to black imo too.
But anyway mate, you're still learning so you could only learn more, and more. Hope you do so you'll become a great artist. You're already a great member. so KIU mate.
I'm now giving you just a comment as you do to everyone, just because you really deserve it.
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05-17-2008, 05:38 AM
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The lightings on his arms are too strong, which make overall effect too LQ.
The font don't fits here at all, on your steps i would try to make it more conceptual, mate.
Try to combinate more with BG, some grungy or paper textures will blends here good IMO.
Try to make this things which i said you. 
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05-17-2008, 05:42 AM
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Fuck, I posted it in the sig section. Sorry I didn't notice.
Could a mod move it please?
Thanks for the comments!
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05-19-2008, 12:44 AM
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I'm gonna agree that the lightning on the arms is way too much for this wallpaper. Other than that, looks great.
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05-19-2008, 04:27 AM
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Bg ok but add some light on soe places,render ok but lower the light on his arms and not so sure about the textures,main tex is nice,remove the blury 1 KIU will.  .
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05-19-2008, 07:27 AM
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apart from the shadow render. i really really like this. the bg is nice. good work with the stadium and nice texturework. the render is good apart from his face, half of it is blurry and half sharp. the effects on his arms are class, text is good aswell. very nice stuff willy. KUTGW
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05-19-2008, 07:30 AM
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Great wall mate, v2 for me.
Colors are really good and fits the render perfectly. Lightning work is nice as well.
Font looks better on v2, and the color of it blends nicely with the rest.
Render work is ace. Textures looks smooth and nice.
The background is good, but think it could be improved a bit.
Keep working mate, looks lovely.
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07-22-2008, 01:18 PM
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Thats really nice mate,good use of textures on the arms and the render effects are pretty good too,the text is executed well and the background looks nice with that stadium,i really like that one mate,keep up the good work 
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07-25-2008, 07:17 PM
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I don't really like the fading on the render. Effects are cool, though.
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