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08-12-2008, 04:51 PM
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Trying to make something new.. I like it very much
Hope u like it.. 
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08-12-2008, 05:10 PM
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I'd suggest you blur the background and then either cut the render or work more on the blending. Clean up all the shapes around the render too as it looks rather messy, the text would be good if it stood out more. Lighting is good although that blob on his ear should be on his shoulder imo.
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08-12-2008, 05:15 PM
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The smal picture you mast blended on light then be a good wall.
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08-12-2008, 07:20 PM
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First of all I love the render. The effects look awesome. The background picture looks a little lq though, it should be blurred a little. The textures look good, and i love the shapes. The text is pretty good too.
Great wall imo! KIU
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08-13-2008, 08:50 AM
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great wall bro! i really love this style. effects are awesome. nice text. i like how u used the same pic in bg. KIU bro!
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08-13-2008, 10:27 AM
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Looks good, the render effects are great, the mosaics look good, fits really well, maybe add some more of those gold lights. The blending could also be better, it'd look much better if you cut it out as a render or something. I think the text is decent, not bad, could still be better though. I think the Ronaldinho stock in the background could be of a bit higher quality, nonetheless it's good. Keep it up! 
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08-13-2008, 11:55 AM
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I like it bro, the lighting looks really good and the blending on the main pic is great, the background is good and the text is hot, keep it up guztavoo !
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08-13-2008, 03:40 PM
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this looks very good, I don't understand though why you putted grunge in to a style like this, this has the need of a lot of lighting, I like the text, remove the spot near his head, and stick to 2 or 3 colors 
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if it wuz jus the OG colours and not these shitty bluegreens it would look nicer
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I love the render, looks very crisp. Nice background textures and colors. The lines work as well and the idea of the text is great, but it is a bit hard to read since it is busy. Maybe you could remove the honeycombish pattern, the mirrored text and the upper brazil text. I like it, I wish I could make such renders.
P.S. The lines on the left of Ronaldinho resemble a swastika...
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