|
 |
|

08-14-2008, 08:58 AM
|
 |
Junior Designer
|
|
Join Date: Feb 2007
Location: Spain
Posts: 317
Credits: 26
Thanks: 9
Thanked 90 Times in 6 Posts
Rep Power: 11
|
|
i didnt do anything in 2 month and now i did that, not my level, yes, but understand me =(

__________________
sig by me n icon by meee!
|

08-14-2008, 09:14 AM
|
 |
FA Member
|
|
Join Date: Jul 2008
Location: :)
Posts: 199
Credits: 25
Thanks: 2
Thanked 12 Times in 2 Posts
Rep Power: 2
|
|
|
it's seem nice too my , not very shit
the BG is almost empty ..
KIU
|

08-14-2008, 09:37 AM
|
 |
<'3
|
|
Join Date: Oct 2007
Location: Copenhagen, Denmark
Posts: 2,876
Credits: 4,402
Thanks: 427
Thanked 91 Times in 28 Posts
Rep Power: 33
|
|
It's not bad mate, the smooth look of it is really good, looks nice. Try to fix the text though, it doesn't really fit, but I quite like the golden light on Evra, try to add more of them. keep it up! 
__________________
sigby o2™
|

08-14-2008, 09:47 AM
|
 |
BARCA BARCA BAAAAAAAAARCA
|
|
Join Date: Sep 2007
Location: Switzerland
Posts: 1,201
Credits: 718
Thanks: 147
Thanked 400 Times in 126 Posts
Rep Power: 18
|
|
|
I join Loscules, nice creation. The player effect is nice. Text could be more worked. Badge of manchester united more incrusted. The lighing work is nice. kiu
__________________
Jugadors,
seguidors,
Tots units fem força,
son molts anys plens d'afanys,
son molts gols que hem cridat,
i s'ha demostrat, s'ha demostrat,
que mai ningú ens podrà torcer,
Blaugrana al vent,
un crit valent,
tenim un nom, el sap tothom,
BARÇA!! BARÇA!! BAAAARÇA!!!!
~m92 ava's
|

08-14-2008, 03:26 PM
|
 |
Lionel Messi !
|
|
Join Date: Jan 2008
Location: New York
Posts: 2,575
Credits: 2,207
Thanks: 69
Thanked 563 Times in 109 Posts
Rep Power: 45
|
|
|
I simply love the render work and the render looks fuckin great, text could be better and maybe add some more work to the background but the wall overall is really nice, sigue asi tio haber cuando hablamos perdidaa !
|

08-14-2008, 06:24 PM
|
 |
Dannyzz
|
|
Join Date: Jun 2007
Posts: 1,909
Credits: 53
Thanks: 218
Thanked 113 Times in 37 Posts
Rep Power: 27
|
|
|
There's a typo, his name is Patrice Evra.
Other than that it's a big step down from your other works. The background elements could be really good if you didn't lower the opacity as much as that, it doesn't look well. The render needs more effects and a more clean color.
|

08-14-2008, 06:26 PM
|
 |
FA Member
|
|
Join Date: Jun 2007
Location: Norway
Posts: 1,055
Credits: 226
Thanks: 51
Thanked 42 Times in 10 Posts
Rep Power: 15
|
|
|
I like the render effects, and the lighting. The effects are decent too, but it's a little too empty imo. Pretty good wall though.
|

08-15-2008, 08:51 AM
|
 |
And-Der-Son!
|
|
Join Date: Feb 2008
Location: Ireland
Posts: 1,422
Credits: 1,985
Thanks: 158
Thanked 56 Times in 19 Posts
Rep Power: 16
|
|
|
I love the render as said add some more golden lighting to it. The text could be bettre and oh its Patrice not partrice. Add something to the bg , apart from that decent wall.
|

08-15-2008, 09:35 AM
|
 |
FA Member
|
|
Join Date: Jul 2008
Posts: 47
Credits: 33
Thanks: 0
Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
Rep Power: 1
|
|
|
The BG is too empty like the light coming out of Evra though
|

08-15-2008, 10:13 AM
|
 |
FA Member
|
|
Join Date: Oct 2007
Posts: 818
Credits: 104
Thanks: 26
Thanked 44 Times in 4 Posts
Rep Power: 11
|
|
|
really not bad mate,, just it's too empty,, you can do better
__________________
avaan'sigbyme
|
 |
|
|
Currently Active Users Viewing This Thread: 1 (0 members and 1 guests)
|
|
|
| Thread Tools |
|
|
| Display Modes |
Linear Mode
|
Posting Rules
|
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts
HTML code is Off
|
|
|
|
|