[miller.]

yarly.

[Sapi]

Looks bad tbh.
The render effects are poor, and it's way too blurry. I think you should sharpen it and use some cleaner and easier effects. The background is very empty and looks boring. Those blue and red lines should also be removed imo! The effects/textures on the render look weird actually, and the distortion looks bad.
Keep working.

[Spinksy]

Itstl.

[YoMax]

It's too blury, there is no BG, and too dark.
BTW, keep it up

[Nathan113]

Decent, can't really tell what the singature is about though on first look.