Thats very nice mate. The lighting is good and I like the style you have gone for. I think one problem though is that a lot of the focus is taken away from the render...maybe try and bring it out a bit more?
Thats only a suggestion though because its brilliant
Yeah looks nice mate, however it's too blurry. The text could be a bit better as well. The effects are looking quite good though, liking the colours there. keep it up