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07-01-2008, 04:18 PM
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07-01-2008, 04:22 PM
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Good stuff, I like it. It's simple, but effective. Colours are good too. Text could be better though.
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07-01-2008, 04:23 PM
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The page-setting on the right looks quite good, but I am pretty sure it would looks better on white background. The concept of this piece is very good, but photo should be in the better quality to fit better into this good project.
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07-01-2008, 04:30 PM
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Really nice, really pro looking. The cyan blue is nice, clean and sleek. Great stuff! KIU! 
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07-01-2008, 05:13 PM
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Nice work, good colours and text. the buttons could be more visible IMO and the photo looks LQ..
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I dont like it, the LQ pic puts me off and i don't think it looks very pro. The text could be a lot better, its quite difficult to read in places.
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07-01-2008, 06:44 PM
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Originally Posted by mgf.
I dont like it, the LQ pic puts me off and i don't think it looks very pro. The text could be a lot better, its quite difficult to read in places.
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07-02-2008, 05:55 AM
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Looks good to me, would've chosen a pic with a better quality though. The light/cyan blue colour looks really nice and gives it a clean look, the text in the right is a bit unreadable though some places. Keep it up!
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the only think i dont like is the photo Quality (: the rest is good
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I think picture is kind of LQ, not your fault cant do any thing with it, but if i were u i would choose another picture,text is great and nice idea .. bg is fine but i'd like to see more of these shapes, nice work kiu 
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